2023年中考英语热点话题写作范文详解-线上学习

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由于近期省内疫情发展，线上学习已经成为一种重要的学习方式。请以“How to Be a Good Online Learner”为题，写一篇英语短文，结合你的线上学习经历，分享至少两条经验。

要求：

1. 80—100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息。

How to Be a Good Online Learner

Online learning is an important way to study recently. _____________________

【2】

同学们再次居家学习，对网课有了更加清晰的认识。请结合下表中的提示，谈一谈网课学习的利与弊，并发表你自己的观点。

要求：

100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总数)；

不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

网课

利

方便，只要有网，随时能学习；

可以免费看回放；

……（至少补充一点）

弊

上课效率不高，容易走神；

对眼睛伤害大；

……（至少补充一点）

你的观点：……

参考词汇：

watch playbacks 观看回放

efficiency n. 效率

distract v. 走神；分心

As the saying goes that every coin has two sides, taking online courses is no exception. _____________________

【3】

学校再次封城封校，面临高中入学考试的九年级同学们不得不在家上网络课程备考，有的学生还被滞留在校学习。请大家根据所给材料，结合自己上网络课的体验，适当发挥，发表一下对网络课堂的看法。

优点：

不用担心看不到黑板；

没有同学的打扰，可以安心学习；

不用走路就能上学，节省时间。

缺点：

可能因网络不稳错过上课；

注意力不能持久；

长时间盯着电子屏幕，不利于视力。

个人观点：

……

参考词汇：

在线课程 online class

面授课程 face-to-face class

打扰 disturb

新冠肺炎 COVID-19

耽误学习 miss the chance to study

Because of the COVID-19, students have to have online classes at home. _____________________

参考答案：

1. One possible version:

How to Be a Good Online Learner

Online learning is an important way to study recently. Because of COVID-19, we have to study at home through the Internet. But how to be a good online learner? Here is my advice.

Last term, when we first started online learning, I wanted to chat with my friends online. But soon I couldn’t catch what the teacher said, so I paid my attention to the classes. As far as I am concerned, we should be strict with ourselves while learning online. We should focus on our study and the classes so that we can learn as much as possible. What’s more, we can also find some friends to learn together so that we can help each other.

In a word, online learning is very convenient, but we also should try our best to be a good online learner.

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本文主要围绕“如何成为一个好的网上学习者”展开，结合自己的经历进行书写，可适当增加细节。

2. 写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。第一段引出话题；第二段结合自己的经历描述如何成为一个好的网上学习者；第三段进行总结。介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

2. One possible version:

As the saying goes that every coin has two sides, taking online courses is no exception.

Some students think that taking online courses has many advantages. One reason is that it is convenient for students to study at home as long as their phones or TV can use the Internet. Another reason is that everyone can watch a playback by apps without paying. At the same time, being late for school hardly happens. And the most important point is that there is no problem of being unable to see the blackboard clearly in online classes.

However, some other students disagree with them. They think that taking online courses has little efficiency and can distract students. What is worse, it is bad for students’ eyes. What’s more, some students may play computer games while taking online courses.

In my opinion, taking online courses is a good way to learn knowledge when we can’t go to school as usual. We can make a learning plan every day so as to follow our teachers and take advantage of the Internet.

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，谈谈网课的利弊，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2. 写作指导：写作时主要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段已给出，引出话题；第二段介绍网课的优点；第三段介绍网课的缺点；第四段表明自己的观点；要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

3. One possible version:

Because of the COVID-19, students have to have online classes at home. But students have different thoughts about studying online. Now let me tell you something about it.

On the one hand, some students like having classes online a lot and they think it has some advantages. First of all, they don’t have to worry about not seeing the blackboard. Facing their computer screen, they can see clearly, which is conducive to their taking notes. Secondly, no one can disturb them in class, they can study with peace of mind and listen to the teacher carefully. Finally, they can go to school without walking, which will save more time. Each coin has two sides. On the other hand, some students don’t enjoy having lessons online at all and they think it has some disadvantages. First, they are worried that if the network is unstable, they will miss the chance to study. Secondly, in online classes, it is difficult for them to concentrate for a long time, and they may miss the key content of the teacher. Finally, they think that staring at the electronic screen for a long time will be bad for their eyesight.

In my opinion, we should make good use of it in our daily life. As a student, we must study hard on our own. When we have classes online, we have to follow the rules and use them in a right way.

We will study hard after school opens!

【详解】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出上网课的利弊以及自己的观点等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。