教学笔记〡2023中考英语书面表达提分方案
中考书面表达题贴近学生实际生活，紧密联系热点话题，写作话题真实从而让考生有话可写。
书面表达情景实用性程度高，各地试题都符合同学们的认知水平和日常生活经历，题目设计关注学生成长，注意培养其良好的道德品质和健全的人格。
考场四步走
1、认真审题
审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
2、构思提纲
有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
3、初写短文
一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
4、修改润色
修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
中考作文是对同学们的知识掌握和应用能力的综合性考查。在考题中所占比重很大，但是对于很多同学来说，得高分并不是一件很容易的事。
分析主要原因，一个是学生在平时的学习中没重视，通常认为作文只要写了，老师多少都能给分，考前备点范文就行呗，其实，这是远远不够的；另一个原因呢，学生自身能力所限。
1、结构要清晰
2、时态要准确
3、短语运用要灵活
4、写全要点
5、书写要认真
1、内容（满分8）
2、语言（满分8）
3、组织结构（满分4）
2022年初中英语最新热点话题写作押题
北京冬奥
1、2022年北京冬奥会即将到来，北京冬奥宣讲团来我校做有关冬奥会的演讲。假如你是我校一名小记者，请根据下面的一份会议记录，为校报写一篇英文报道。
注意：1、词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数；2、回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3、文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Recently, the Education Tour for 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics has come to our school and made an exciting speech to the students. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2、假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter非常关注2022年北京冬奥会，他想了解北京的学生是如何迎接冬奥会的。请你给Peter写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们学校开展了哪些活动，你参加了哪一项活动，具体做了什么，有什么感受。
提示词语：skating, poster (海报), draw, write introductions, proud
提示问题：
What activities did your school hold?
Which activity did you take part in?
What did you do? How did you feel?
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you’re interested in the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games.
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If you want to know more about the Games, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
3、根据中文和英文提示，用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李华，你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会，倡导人人都做文明中学生。请你根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Peter写一封邮件，告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受。
提示词语respect, say hello to, wait in line
1.What is important for a middle school student? (Being polite to other? Following rule? …)
2. What do you usually do?
3. How do you feel?
Dear Peter,
How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good student. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Anything new at your school?
Yours,
Li Hua
4、假如你是李华，为了迎接“冬奥会”的到来，你们学校将要在下周五下午放学后举办“我运动，我健康”的运动健身活动，你打算邀请你们班交换生 Peter 参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间和地点，活动内容，以及他需要做什么准备。
提示词语：playground, fun, experience, bring
提示问题：When and where will the activity be held?
What will you do?
What do you advise Peter to prepare for it?
高 分 范 文 1
Recently, the Education Tour for 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics has come to our school and mad an exciting speech to the students.
On the afternoon of April 15, all the Grade 9 students gathered together in the school hall and enjoyed the speech. At first, some famous Chinese Olympic athletes shared their interesting stories with us. Then, they expressed the hope of letting more people know about the Olympic spirits, They asked young people to take part in some voluntary work so that we can make friends with people from other countries and spread different cultures
After listening to the speech, we were deeply moved and encouraged. Why not take action now?
1、题干解读：题目要求你根据一份2022冬奥会宣讲会议记录，为校报写一篇英文报道。要求包括2022冬奥会的宣讲人、时间、地点、参加人员以及宣讲内容等，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；介绍冬奥会宣讲时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
高 分 范 文 2
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you’re interested in the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games. Our school held rich activities to welcome the great Games, such as offering lessons about winter sports and taking students to try skating and skiing. There was also a poster show about the Games.
I’m good at drawing, so I took an active part in the poster show. I drew pictures of some winter sports and wrote introductions about them. I also expressed my best wishes for the Games. When I made the poster, I felt very excited and proud.
If you want to know more about the Games, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
1、题干解读：该题目属于电子邮件作文。题目要求是请你以李华的身份，根据提示背景，给你的笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们学校为迎接冬奥会，开展了哪些活动，你参加了哪一项活动，具体做了什么，有什么感受。
2、写法指导：结合材料内容可知，本文使用第一人称叙述，时态以一般过去时为主；文中给出了主要写作要点，动笔前，要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上，提示的问题就是写作的基本方向；然后围绕要点，适当发挥；语言表述要符合语法结构，造句要符合英语表达习惯，不要出现语法错误；适当使用连词，要做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
高 分 范 文 3
Dear Peter,
How is it going? At my school we are talking about what we should do to be a good student.
To be a polite middle school student, I think we have to do a lot of things. First, it’s important for us to speak politely. We must respect the others. Second, we can’t throw rubbish everywhere. We must throw them in the rubbish bins. Littering is not a good habit. Every time I go to the park, I always pick up the litter and put it into the bin. I think if we all do so, the world will be cleaner. Another important thing is that we must follow the rules. There is no doubt that waiting in line is the important rule. I never rush into the bus. Waiting may be a happy thing. I often feel happy when I do something that is better for us. I think being a polite middle school student is proud.
Anything new at your school?
Yours,
Li Hua
1、题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。作文内容围绕你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受三个方面展开描写。
2、写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主，短文的开头和结尾已经给出，在中内容具体说明做个文明中学生哪些事情是重要的；自己通常怎么做一名文明学生；以及自己做一名文明学生的感受。叙述完整，条理清晰。
高 分 范 文 4
Dear Peter
How is it going?
I’m writing to invite you to take part in our activity on “Doing Sports Makes Me Fit” in our school. It will be held on the playground after school next Friday afternoon. There will be some fun fitness activities.
We can experience some events of the Winter Olympic Games, and we can also take part in some sports. You’d better wear comfortable shoes and bring some water with you. I’m sure you’ll love it.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1、题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。主要告知对方“我运动，我健康”活动的时间、地点、活动内容、准备内容等。
2、写作指导：文章主要以第一人称展开描述；时态采用一般现在时。动笔前要认真阅读提示词语及提示问题，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。适当使用连词，使文章条理清晰，上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
